OK FEEDBACK!!!
I GOT A B2!!!!
even though its just provisional it means that actually like it! I spoke to Jon to get this and he pointed out that if i don't hand in a finished product i will fail but there is scope for improvement. I need to make it more detailed. But all the things that didn't go my way were "easily" fixable.
Design (in general) - B
Execution - C (I think I was pretty lucky)
Details - C
Materials - B
Interaction - A (AMAZING!!!!!)
comments:
Well done - this is the best so far with your making - and commendable given where you were at PLAY. But this is far from finished. the lace (i think he meant to say silk) requires a better finish (perhaps by a professional) (I had decided on getting it made) the details need working out - maybe more delicate? it needs to work - how will it be switched on/off?
A general comment is that it is currently not beautiful enough - a very fair one I would say
Consider the light - you used cold (why?) do you have a cold light and a warm light?
Tips for Talk:
Be clear who it is for - it is not for everyone. Find the perfect venue for a photo shoot. Make sure your photos have a range of skin tones - don't make it exclusively for white middle class people!!
So all in all a fair feedback i have soooo much work to do.